As you...

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Don'tBlaisMeBro (Folle et simple est la brebis qui au loup se confesse.) on Monday, 20-Dec-2004 20:04:43

As you look, I hope you see me,
As you look, I hope you know I still do care,
I'll shadder the perseptions around you,
Break the walls away from you,
Just so you can see,
Just so you can breathe again.
For what it's worth,
For what it may be, may become, may have been, I'll never let what we have go,
I'll continue on with my internal battles,
Subcontiously making sure your alive,
Yet I'll let you live, let you experience, share, love, take, give, unearth.
For I know that, one day we'll see each other again,
And when we do, I'll never let you go,
Never let you leave my side, leave my head, you never leave my head,
I'll walk with you, share with you, die for you, kill for you, break down the walls of imperfection you hide behind.
Just because, I love you.

I'm odd? just somethin' that's in my brain...


Me hopes ya like,


Cort

Post 2 by iammewhoru (Veteran Zoner) on Tuesday, 21-Dec-2004 12:01:21

WOW that was great...who did you have in mind when you wrote that?

Post 3 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Tuesday, 21-Dec-2004 18:03:19

Hi Cort, You are right about the Wall Building. So many walls at times we build, blocking out others and locking ourselves in to where Yes, so difficult it can be to breathe. It is good when there are Ones who enter our lives and YES! shadder the perseptions that we view our world with, the perseptins that are somehow leading us nowhere and we would continue to go in a darkened fog if it were not for those who enter and breathe a Newness in, who new vitality enrich our lives with. Keep writing... your words give you to be older than you actually are, someone who has experienced more and on a deeper level... Connie

Post 4 by Leafs Fan (I'll have the last word, thank you!) on Wednesday, 22-Dec-2004 14:08:50

I like that writing. A very good way with words!

Post 5 by Bridgett (Generic Zoner) on Thursday, 23-Dec-2004 1:49:01

Very, very good!!!